Friday 12 March 2010

s1-20 feedback

The work produced by s1-22 was of high standard and we can see that they put in a lot of work and effort into their production. This can be shown by a numerous amount of camera angles and edits, such as an over the shoulder shot that allows the audience to grasp the story, and also the fact that this shot and the one before it was put into slow motion to make the audience acknowledge what the character was looking at.
However, the mise-en-scene is a bit mysterious, we don't really understand why the woman character was dressed up and then at the end, why the man is stalking her. There is a good use of location, as it shows that the character is waiting for a bus and has nowhere to go. The ending is also good as it leaves it as a cliffhanger and entices you to watch further, however the bit when the man comes back with the mask on kind of ruins the ending.
At the beginning, there is a good use of sound when the camera is slowly moving into the map as it builds up tension and suspense. On the other hand, the speech during the meet is a bit quiet and could be helped by loudening it.

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