feedback from s1-21

WE are very impressed with the amount of work put into the rough cut. For example the music starting before the clip gave a good introduction. The slow zoom into an over the shoulder was well constructed because even though there wasn't a lot of action going on it gave you time to digest what the storyline would be and showed they were not afraid to have a slow but intense beginning. We were unsure why they were dressed up. To increase the tension we believe they should have build up the excitement of the story more, making you want to carry on watching. They introduced the characters well, however they need to include titles to show the name of the film at least.